pure or lost, spectator or crucified
recognised truth acedia's blackest hole
junkies winos whores the nation's moral suicide
loser - liar - fake - phoney
no one cares, everyone is guilty
fucked up - dunno why - you poor little boy
we are all of walking abortion
shalom shalom we all love our children
we all are of walking abortion
shalom shalom there are no horizons
Mussolini hangs from a butcher's hook
Hitler reprised in the worm of your soul
Horthy's corpse screened to a million
Tisu revived, the horror of a bullfight
fragments of uniforms, open black ruins
a moral conscience - you've no wounds to show
so wash your car in your 'X' baseball shoes
we all are of walking abortion
shalom shalom we all love our children
we are all of walking abortion
shalom shalom there are no horizons
little people in little houses
like maggots small blind and worthless
the massacred innocent blood stains us all
who's responsible - you fucking are
who's responsible - you fucking are
who's responsible - you fucking are
who's responsible - you fucking are
who's responsible.





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but, mainly, Stay Classy
hope some of my comments could help you out a bit. and more than anything, i hope you post more very soon...
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I'll die drowned by your standards
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I'm currently cleaning out my message center. That involves replying to all the comments, so if the above is way late, I apologize!
your work is great aswell, you have a very unique style of writing, and i like it!!
keep it up my dear, and take care..
lol
welcome 2 DA. I liked your story, but Im too tired to critique now...will do l8er- maybe tomorrow arvo lol now im rambling...see how tired I am
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The alter ego strikes again
Artistic photogrpahy is not redundant!
Creative consultant for CW- all welcome [link]
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